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The heavy katana smacked hard against my shield as he quickly slashed faster then my eyes could keep up. Finally the man used his weight against me and tossed me backwards, forcing my shield up as I tumbled. As he went to slash his blade at my chest, I quickly reacted and bent my knees, to the ground as his blade missed me by mere millimeters, cutting my long white hair clean in half. Quickly I smacked him with my shield, forcing him to stagger backwards. His eyes filled with rage as he quickly regained his balance and looked towards me, barring his fangs.
The mi'qotes black ears with red highlighted tips lay against his head as he growled within his deep voice. He moved his blade quickly and before I knew what had happened, he was placing the blade in his sheath. Clicking into place, my shield fell to pieces as several deep cuts appeared upon my body. I knelt down in pain as I tried to scream out only to have him approach me and grasp my neck. Forcing me back upon my feet while he looked me deep into my red eyes.
"You killed my parents. You killed my sister. You destroyed my life! Now I will destroy Yours!"
"K-Kroh-*COUGH*"
I struggled to try and talk with him, only to begin coughing and splitting blood while my wounds failed to heal. His blades power seemingly halting my power in full.
"Let's see you heal this!"
He held his blade up to my eyes and quickly sliced through both, leaving blind as he released me to fall to the ground. My body was cowering in horror as I desperately reached around me to find something to shield myself.
"Look at you now. The great Allag Weapon cowering like a damned babe. You did not even bring your blade to me. You disgrace yourself. Fighting like a child afraid to bring harm to your mortal enemy!"
He placed his foot underneath my stomach and pushed me to face up while I seemed to weak to even move. I listened helplessly as I tried to talk, only to cough more and more. Cringing as I heard him pick up a blade from behind him.
"This is the blade which beheaded my father is it not? You ever feel your heart break? Skip an entire beat while those you love are killed before your eyes!? Let's see how you like it!"
He placed a foot upon my right shoulder, keeping me in place as he forced the blade through my chest, heart and then through my back, pinning me to the ground. I listened to him breath heavily as he let out insane laughter slowly staggering away from me as I stopped coughing, breathing and felt my life flow away.
/em sets popcorn down and walks over to Esper.. "I told you, you should not sprinkle catnip over your armor! It just makes him go insane! /em pulls out the sword and hops into Espers body to heal her.
Very nice read Esper, I like it, very passionate and good fight sequence!
Think of this as a what if the espers won against the allag and actually claimed the world as their own :3
Sounds like fun!
And we fight in a resistance effort to take the world back? Sounds interesting!
Wait wait! I need her body.. For science of course!!
If we can replicate her cells we can genetically modify them and inject them into soldiers! ... We'll call them SOLDIER
Has a fine ring to it, let's tack on 1st class and go down from there.. Ahh alternate universes
Great short Espurrrr
Well something like that ^-^ their is a bit of a plot twist right at the get go so it should be at least an interesting story. Do not intend it to be super long but who knows!?
... I didn't break the timeline... honest.
Well such is the problem when messing with time master denzy ;3 you never know what might pop up as you make a leave your new trail behind!
whats the eorzea equivilent to millimeters?
an ilm in the game is close to 2.5cms (or so it says on the forums)
good read either way!
Very good read Esper and a alternate timeline
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Esper :(.... .....
Is okay raven is merely a preview yus yus. Grabs the attention I thinks ;3
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It did grab my attention and it was a very good read.
*hides box of tissues*
XD
Aweee *pets Ravens ears*
I sound like Jack the Ripper from MGR with the maniacal laughter; damn I'm messed up o-o
Well I meant it to seem like a laughter where he has nothing else left in his mind, knowing he fulfilled a life long goal. Which was why he was stumbling. Not knowing weather to be happy or sad or even horrified over what he just did. So MGR raidens laughter might just fit
Given that he was prone to nervous breakdowns, this version of Kroh really fits; well done!
This is interesting. Hope to read more of this. :3